History: Synava/1

8 January 2018

• curprev 00:3400:34, 8 January 2018‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 34,542 bytes −2‎ So I was wondering if I've ever used 'whom' turns out I have, only twice here, & it was incorrect usage

4 March 2011

• curprev 01:3401:34, 4 March 2011‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 34,544 bytes −415‎ Removing completely horrible drawl

7 April 2007

• curprev 14:5014:50, 7 April 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,959 bytes −102‎ ocean travel is sort of expensive
• curprev 13:4113:41, 7 April 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 35,061 bytes +420‎ I think that makes more sense than making your shopping list while standing on the market. Also, a normal ship has, like, four sails at most, twenty five is too big.
• curprev 04:4404:44, 7 April 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,641 bytes +106‎ →‎Soul Bond: that sounds better(YAY ENTROPY)
• curprev 04:4004:40, 7 April 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,535 bytes −72‎ I always was bugged by that part(still half am)
• curprev 04:0104:01, 7 April 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,607 bytes +37‎ →‎Two Groups of Two Combine into One Group of Four

5 April 2007

• curprev 22:5922:59, 5 April 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,570 bytes −59‎ kept enough stats(I personally like stats,so gota keep some)and reworded some
• curprev 21:2221:22, 5 April 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,629 bytes +102‎ I just don't like specific measures so much, if you like them, just add them again and I'll never delete anymore.

30 March 2007

• curprev 00:3000:30, 30 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,527 bytes −222‎ odd chapter I wrote here

29 March 2007

• curprev 22:4422:44, 29 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,749 bytes +327‎ A ruby coin? Would you mind a copper? (Also, you may not like drunkspeak)
• curprev 22:2622:26, 29 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,422 bytes +116‎ I think you mean brain there. And do they need to vomit so much? I mean, can't they just get dizzy or something?

25 March 2007

• curprev 01:4901:49, 25 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,306 bytes +32‎ A pure diamond window!? deleted specific measures, add them again if you like. And I think it's a dome.
• curprev 01:4301:43, 25 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,274 bytes +2‎ You need to learn your verb tenses(I like your structure though,I was really unfocused when I wrote this so it doesn't have the voice of To Mance a Mance)
• curprev 01:2701:27, 25 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,272 bytes +6‎ Rule number one, don't finish sentences with commas
• curprev 01:1701:17, 25 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,266 bytes +28‎ What's with all the secondary veins?

22 March 2007

• curprev 19:4319:43, 22 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,238 bytes −29‎ fixed foolishness(I love the word fool,and noncompos)
• curprev 19:3719:37, 22 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,267 bytes −229‎ fixed shruiken stuff(now to take out the foolish)
• curprev 19:1619:16, 22 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,496 bytes +59‎ →‎An Enemy is Met
• curprev 15:4915:49, 22 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,437 bytes +89‎ →‎The First Lesson:Runes

19 March 2007

• curprev 23:5723:57, 19 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,348 bytes +188‎ cinnamon
• curprev 19:5919:59, 19 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,160 bytes +7‎ →‎An Explanation is Demanded

18 March 2007

• curprev 17:5517:55, 18 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 34,153 bytes −7‎ brain=no
• curprev 16:3616:36, 18 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ m 34,160 bytes −7‎ →‎Information on Magick
• curprev 16:3516:35, 18 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,167 bytes +27‎ →‎The more Complex Areas of Spells
• curprev 16:3016:30, 18 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,140 bytes +13‎ →‎The more Complex Areas of Natural Magick
• curprev 16:2216:22, 18 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ m 34,127 bytes +31‎ →‎the Basics
• curprev 03:4203:42, 18 March 2007‎ Modred Message Wall contribs‎ m 34,096 bytes +1‎ of=off
• curprev 02:5502:55, 18 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,095 bytes +109‎ →‎A Talk about Magick and Weaponry

17 March 2007

• curprev 18:5518:55, 17 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,986 bytes −2‎ ch1
• curprev 18:5518:55, 17 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,988 bytes −8‎ ch1
• curprev 18:0218:02, 17 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 33,996 bytes −96‎ Took the words chapter and part off.
• curprev 18:0118:01, 17 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,092 bytes −77‎ Took the words chapter and part off.
• curprev 16:1916:19, 17 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 34,169 bytes +199‎ →‎Chapter 2:Magick...: - You mean ships, right?
• curprev 15:5615:56, 17 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,970 bytes 0‎ →‎Chapter 7:An Enemy is Met: I sort of like this experimental style,so please don't take away its style
• curprev 14:5014:50, 17 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,970 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 14:0814:08, 17 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,969 bytes −17‎ typo
• curprev 14:0614:06, 17 March 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 33,986 bytes +18‎ Proper Names are confusing,I know.And yes,this novel needs improvement cuz it has serious flaws(Though most of which originate with the foundations,so its screwed no matter what)
• curprev 12:0812:08, 17 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,968 bytes −1‎ →‎Chapter 1:Kikaz’s Plan, Confessed to Kizox
• curprev 12:0812:08, 17 March 2007‎ Nonimportant Message Wall contribs‎ 33,969 bytes +430‎ You asked for it.

25 February 2007

• curprev 00:0500:05, 25 February 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ m 33,539 bytes +7‎ P1

24 February 2007

• curprev 23:4023:40, 24 February 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 33,532 bytes −49‎ this part is exactly 32KB,so it has an edit warning
• curprev 23:3523:35, 24 February 2007‎ Serprex Message Wall contribs‎ 33,581 bytes +33,581‎ I'm going to do Syn with 6 parts,though I don't know how with Nerq