Talk:Harbinger/1

"in a sea so red, orange, and absent of life."

I love the writing technique of putting concrect and abstract characteristics in the same sentence (Like: "The queen sat on her throne, looking with arrogance to her servants. No other woman was possibly able to look so regal, so self-assured, and so fat.").

Hmm...a psychological portrait huh? Nothing can beat a psychological portrait as a first part for a story (although he appears excruciatingly perfect, I assume that's only the outer layer of his personality). Looking forward for updates. --Nonimportant 01:05, 24 May 2007 (UTC)