Talk:The Opposite of Grey

Interesting, while not particularly strong. You definitely need to work on making the story less monotonous. Right now it's--not to be mean, but--incredibly boring. We generally can't associate with Colors the way we can with Emotions or anything else in real life, so that problem is very likely to be because of your goal, not just your writing style. 23:28, 28 December 2007 (UTC)