User talk:God'sGirl94

By the way, are you a woman? If so, I would like your comments on my stories, like I will wait for you or The search for Kalid, where I wrote about female characters, but I don't have a clue if I am accurate or not describing a female's mind. I hope we can write stories in Collaboration in the future. --David - talk 20:22, 25 February 2009 (UTC) Thanks for reading my stories. Well, the second is a very big story, it's a novel. Basically, it is set in the future and Leone needs to find Kalid, in order to save his own planet from destruction; Set, an evil person will slaughter the whole planet. Thus, Leone seeks advice on Sybil (a priestess) who will guide him in order for him to find Kalid. Although the story is science fiction, we are treating the subject of the feasibility of telepathy and the ability to train it. The story explores the boundaries of spirituality and science (although I still need to add more spiritual background to the story).

I would recommend reading this part, which is a flashback (non sequential) about the female character. It's a scene where she remembers how she entered a secret order:

http://fiction.wikia.com/wiki/The_search_for_Kalid/novel#Worried and http://fiction.wikia.com/wiki/The_search_for_Kalid/novel#Destiny.

I will read your stories too and maybe we can collaborate.

--David - talk 22:13, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

There is this thing called Special:RecentChanges. Every edit users do appear in there. I like to welcome new users and so I found you:

User:God'sGirl94 (dif; hist). . (+403) . . God'sGirl94 (Discusión | contribuciones | bloquear) (New page: Isn't that the truth! == FICTION ROCKS!!!!!!!! == Hey all you fiction fans! I'm God'sGirl94 and I LOVE fiction. I've been writing a bunch of differe...)

I got interested for the mention of God and girl in your nickname. Now that I remember, I want to ask why you mention God in there. Are you of a religious nature? I like to study about religion.

About the cat simile... you mean saying Kat for Katherine? I don't remember. Well, I was asking for Sybil character but you found my Katherine character too, very nice. Oh, wait... did you read the entire Kalid story? --David - talk 22:24, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

I Have Never Spoken or Written in Italian Before
I have never spoken or written in Italian before. So, no, I don't know any Italian. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 20:36, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

But, I do, however, know Spanish. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 20:36, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Can we collaborate?
Perhaps we can. Colaborating over Hillbilly Harlan would be difficult because I'm British and I don't understand American culture well enough. I've tried to write parts of The Lord of the Wikis and I'm having a bit of trouble over that. I imagine Mark and Angie living in a run down old sky scraper where many residents are poor. Are there American sky scrapers like that? I don't know. I'm very busy at the moment with The Aliens of the Flaming Red Sun. I'd appreciate comments and feedback about that work. Proxima Centauri 20:45, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

The Firsst Chapter of Mi Amor Es Para Siempre
How do you like what I have done to the first chapter of [[Mi Amor Es Para Siempre? User:God'sGirl94? &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 20:54, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

I am currently working on the second chapter of Mi Amor Es Para Siempre. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 20:54, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

The Way User:Davichito Spruced Up My Beloved Girlfriend
I love, love, love the way that David has spruced up My Beloved Girlfriend. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 21:46, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Don't you, User:God'sGirl94? &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 21:46, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Response
Yes. I love to write fiction. I'm currently writing a book that I hope to get published. I like to write horror and thriller stories. What kinds do you like?--SeniorYearfan 24 HSM 3! 23:53, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Rated? Yes, I read you commented I did a good job with the female character description. Thanks a lot. Feedback is always appreciated. --David - talk 00:14, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

>I've been writing a bunch of different novels and series books.

I noticed this comment on your user page. Very interesting. May I know how many novels and the topics you write in there? I have written one novel so far and I am working on a second. The first was about a "dream machine" and the second is about computer simulations. --David - talk 00:23, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

That seventeen year old girl driving, in your story, has got me intrigued... --David - talk 02:02, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

What I'm Currently Doing.
I am currently thing up some storylines for Chapter 2 of Mi Amor Es Para Siempre and Chapter 5 of My Beloved Girlfriend. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 15:37, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

What are you doing, User:God'sGirl94? &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 15:37, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

What? I am here. I am helping Ericthebrainiac with his story. It's just that I try to talk only when I have something to say. It does not mean I read all the messages... --David - talk 15:49, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
 * I don't have two user names. I change my signature every once in a while. Sometimes it'll say Pirakafreak24 and sometimes it'll say something else like HSM3FAN with a 24 at the end that way people know its me.--SeniorYearfan 24 HSM 3! 16:58, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes. Yes I do.--SeniorYearfan 24 HSM 3! 16:48, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
 * It is very good. Do you have the soundtrack? If you get the movie, get the two disk edition. It comes with a digital copy for your iPod.--SeniorYearfan 24 HSM 3! 18:35, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Its not that shocking. I didn't get one untill two years ago. I have a second generation iPod, so it only plays songs. Its not that bad though. Also, get the soundtrack! Its great! Get the 2 disk premeir edition CD. It comes with a bonus DVD. with makings of the movie and more.--<font color="Black">SeniorYearfan <font color="Red">24 <font color="Black">HSM <font color= "Red">3! 04:30, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

I apologize if I caused some trouble by writing that porn scene in the story of Ericthebrainiac. It was just a sentence I expanded in 10 paragraphs. You might discuss with him and others about how we should handle those cases. I will only delete a page (I am an admin) when there is consensus, which means saying opinions, then voting. Or if a page is against some policy. We don't have a policy about erotic stories that I know of, if you dig enough you may find stories about sex, drugs, porn, etc, in here. But a story that was explicit was deleted once, anyway. I think I made a mistake in making that. So, you can create a forum to discuss the issue of sexuality in stories in here and the community will vote for it. We will decide which content we will accept, etc. Only then I can delete the page, in case that is the solution. Deletion of pages is only when there is a violation of wikia or Fiction wikia policies... --David - talk 21:35, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

Your feedback was nice to me. Since it was my first "dirty" or vulgar scene, I wanted to know what people thought about it. I personally disliked it so much I was wondering if I should delete it, like I did. It's no good to promote pornography in any way... or adultery... --David - talk 23:35, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

Sorry David but i don't agree with you. P ornography should be promoted we are not sexless machine drones--Veriteo 08:40, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Christmas story
Really? Thanks! Since the Christmas season's over I kinda got out of the mood...I guess I just add a bit every Christmas. But yeah I will definitely continue the rest of it! Millenian 02:08, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Sure! In the meantime if you have any ideas let me know, maybe I'll add them! Millenian 00:21, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Interwiki links
I fixed the interwiki links on your user page. I hope you don't mind. --Michaeldsuarez (Talk) (Deeds) 17:19, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. --Michaeldsuarez (Talk) (Deeds) 20:59, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Ecclesiasticus
Quotes from Ecclesiasticus 20:


 * There is one that keepeth silence, and is found wise: and another by much babbling becometh hateful.
 * Some man holdeth his tongue, because he hath not to answer: and some keepeth silence, knowing his time.
 * He that useth many words shall be abhorred; and he that taketh to himself authority therein shall be hated.
 * To slip upon a pavement is better than to slip with the tongue: so the fall of the wicked shall come speedily.
 * How good is it, when thou art reproved, to shew repentance! for so shalt thou escape wilful sin.
 * There is a reproof that is not comely: again, some man holdeth his tongue, and he is wise.

If you understand those you will not reply. I recommend you read the entire Ecclesiasticus, it can help you. --Micaelus 18:55, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

My feelings can't be damaged by you im am 17 years old and i know kids my age that have a incredible shame about sex because they were teached that sex is shameful God teached me that sex is a joy and i am very happy that i was teached about sex from an earlier age--Veriteo 20:52, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

I don't know where David is right now
I don't know where David is right now, but you may ask User:JWSchmidt on his current whereabouts. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 20:01, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

RE: Thanks
Alright, but I'm not telling anyone to stop being Christian. I'm not asking anyone to believe in something that they feel is untrue. I'm Rastafari, but I'm not telling anyone to become Rastafari believers. Just keep your religious views to yourself and in your writings; just don't bring them up on a forum that seeks unbias facts and conclusions. --Michaeldsuarez (Talk) (Deeds) 22:12, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Ecclesiasticus is the Latin name for http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sirach, in the Old Testament, one of the books of wisdom. It can be found online at http://www.biblicalproportions.com/modules/ol_bible/King_James_Bible/Ecclesiasticus/. --Micaelus 22:57, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Taking Over David's Position as My Collaborator
You may take over David's position as collaborator for My Beloved Girlfriend and Mi Amor Es Para Siempre if you wish. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 17:09, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Archives/English/Poem
I corrected your archiving and now it works nice. See the changes http://fiction.wikia.com/index.php?title=Archives%2FEnglish%2FPoem&diff=64019&oldid=63976. Basically I added {{Work at the beginning of each work and removed brackets around the titles, because the template automatically creates them. --Acey &bull; gossip. 22:14, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

Hey there
I think you will like the short story i just wrote (or at least most of it), Journey Through Life, and i wouldn't mind some feedback from you on it :)

I have just written a drama so you might be interested in that (disclaimer, it's not positive): Loss. Other then that there is a story i want to write in my native language (Dutch) of which i have a basic idea how it will go, and i have no idea what other stories after that will be like :) Dearon 02:15, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Feedback
i am making a story on God and id like to know to you think about it []--Veriteo 20:01, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

You wanted fixed spacing, I fixed it. Except I think I missed a newline in all my clumsinessUser:Serprex 21:05, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Category:God's Fan Fiction is a category I created for Veriteo's The Book of Avatar. It could be used for stories in which God plays a central role. It is a category that needs to be expanded with stories. --Acey &bull; gossip. 16:21, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

For my story someone made a category called Religion, why not use that? Dearon 19:20, 17 March 2009 (GMT+1)

reading
what are you doing <-- Today I was writing about a character named "Thomas" (at Cellular Civilization) and I was doing some background reading at Thomas the Apostle. --JWSchmidt 17:07, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
 * what did you discover <-- David came up with the name "Thomas" for that character. I've been trying to get some additional inspiration from famous people who had the name "Thomas". I'm now reading about Thomas Aquainas. Here is a nice quote: "for the knowledge of any truth whatsoever man needs divine help". In Cellular Civilization Thomas is infected by tiny machines that give him "visions" and make him "hear things" that his doctors warn him to ignore. I'm wondering if it might be worth while to give this character a religious background and perspective on his strange experiences. --JWSchmidt 23:25, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I am always open to collaboration. Propose a story and I'll see if I can help. I am short of new ideas so I would have to collaborate on a story created by another person. --Davinci - conversar 20:27, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Good idea. But then the girl would be more like an animal, right? Since nobody taught her language or human culture. It's interesting. --Davinci - conversar 20:47, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Let's use Shoutbox or http://irc.wikia.com/ (channel #fiction-wikia) to discuss this faster. I'm in Shoutbox now. Through talk pages, we might take years... hehe. --Davinci - conversar 20:53, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Hello !
Hi, I'm trying to get to know some of the newer users. How are you? What kind of stuff do you write? --

I am a bit curious. How old are you, Godsgirl? --Acey &bull; gossip. 17:22, 26 March 2009 (UTC)