Talk:Nine Jobs

I liked the story. I never thought a story of that size could have so much intrigue. The ending is pretty good actually; it was completely unexpected. I like the fact that it's cyberpunk without "punk", that is, drugs and decadence are not that central to the story or at least the main character. The society is well depicted and it fits in that genre due to the mega corporations. I was expecting a description of the hack but that would scare non-tech readers, maybe. I was a bit confused with the handling of past and present tense in the story but I finally could understand why.

The story is solid and generates intrigue from the beginning. I would comment that it lacks dialogue since most things are described in third point of view... but maybe that would spoil the effect since dialogue is not that important in here; what is important is the idea and the action (I am a fan of dialogue over actions). The whole idea of computers is very interesting. Good job! --David - talk 14:29, 20 February 2009 (UTC)