The Start of Eternity/meta/Phase map

This page provides a detailed outline of The Start of Eternity. This can be useful for making sure that each scene has a coherent beginning, middle, and end with a meaningful conflict/challenge in each scene and an obvious reason for the reader to continue on to the next scene. A less detailed outline is at the main meta page.

Phase maping
"A phase might be a snippet of conversation, how a character feels about something, or an action or event. Each phase is small and should focus on one thing." (source)

Chapter 0
This chapter introduces Observer Gohrlay and R. Gohrlay and Gohrlay's struggle to protect humanity from the Huaoshy.

scene 1
This scene is a "teaser". The reader should wonder why Gohrlay is willing to die and have her mind downloaded. 1. Observer Gohrlay's dream of being trapped on the Moon. 2. Overseer Doltun and Orbho Anagro arrive at Gohrlay's home, interrupting her sleep. 3. Gohrlay is identified as a Neanderthal and Doltun's genetic origin is from another human subspecies, but they live on the Moon at Observer Base. 4.