Talk:The Price of Freedom/0

First draft
Keep in mind this is my version of a first draft. Which is to say nowhere near what a final, completed version of the prologue would look like, which would last a great deal longer and probably include some major character development in the form of following one (or both) of the two captains on their way to the meeting, much more detail about the surrounding environment, et cetera. MageKing17 00:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)