Talk:Kingdoms of Lies and Truth

Uh...Yun, I think that's a prologue, not an outline. And not a bad one, by the way. However, is this story supposed to be in the second person? Because that's so crazy that it might work! But, of course, the chances of it failing miserably are much greater. --Nonimportant 21:04, 12 November 2007 (UTC)