Talk:The Start of Eternity

The technical parts are good considering this is sci-fi. However, the jargon starts getting over the head, such as "apical". ... Right. How about less confusing terminology, and relating to earthen species, so that we know what each crew member looks like?

Overall, a strong work with substantial novelty.

I'm happy to see that you're back and productive as ever after all this time!

Cheers, 14:27, 13 May 2008 (UTC)