Talk:Into the Void/1

The multiple perspectives of Earth can seem repetitive, though that might be your preferred angle (How similar we are, the beauty in the small differences, etc)

I recently watched The Fourth Kind. They employed a proper method to convey similarity across multiple people in a story that'd be repetitive to repeat by having each tell a portion of the same story

Consistent lengths of sections are nice, though risky in the damage a fumble would cause

You might consider === over ==. The bold paragraph starts are annoying

The idea that humans are developing at an abnormal rate seems more optimistic than I care to be, though someone more technophobic might view it as a pessimistic outlook. All that might be a simple backdrop though, depending on how much you plan to focus on actionUser:Serprex 20:18, April 19, 2011 (UTC)