Talk:The Start of Eternity/16

Doltun's death
I originally wrote this chapter in such a way that Doltun was killed by Gohrlay. However, I think her need to protect humanity could be served by incapacitating Doltun in such a way that he is seriously injured, but can be healed by medical nanites. This change would have two major benefits. First, I don't think that Gohrlay could intentionally kill a human in order to protect a robot. Second, if Doltun recovers then he can later be shown working with R. Gohrlay, as discussed here. --JWSchmidt 16:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)