Talk:FRiENDS ~ LOVE CiRCLE/2

Okay, okay, slow down a bit. You are introducing way too many characters. I committed this fault a long time ago when I wrote my first story and had to take out a notebook paper to keep track of all 100+ characters that were all barely developed. And that's just for the writer! What would a reader have to do to keep on top of all these characters? Are they even going to pay attention them at all, considering that since there are so many characters few of them will pay more than a passing role in the story? I have barely caught on to the protagonist's style and now I am flooded with all these additional characters! That is not what you want a reader to think for your story. 16:12, 25 January 2008 (UTC)