Talk:The Birth of True Evil

Wow. Wow. This story is far too well written and far too well formatted to have such a plot. Sure, there are some typos here and there, but seriously, eight diamonds spread across the world, and a hero going to get them? Final Fantasy does that every time (they do have more typos most of time, though), but they have characters and a fairly interesting world and (somewhat cheap) philosophy. If you worked some characterization in there, gave me a reason to care for this world and its inhabitants, and conflict, even if it's only PVE, with no villains, it'd be a very great read. Unless it's meant to be that way. I mean, is it a joke? 'Cuz it sure sounds funny (especially the description of true EVIL). If this is a joke it's gotta be one of the best I've ever heard. Otherwise, meh. --Nonimportant 01:03, 10 April 2008 (UTC)