User talk:Snv1986

You REALLY have to work on your English and writing skills. This is borderline unacceptable. Please have someone proofread your work before submitting from now on. And why does it end with "continue--", do you mean for others on this site to continue your story? That has a 99% chance of not happening.

Now, for the story. It's very undeveloped, it's not coherent, we don't know what Smriti is (if person, why is it alternating between male and female?), and it's a very boring, unsuspenseful story. Please spend plenty of time reworking it before you plan to submit another story.

Also, your creation of a new archives does not make sense, since the work is not written in Hindi. Please do not make new archives from now on. 15:13, 1 February 2008 (UTC)