Talk:La amenaza de NovaMaat/2

The scene of Sybil Latante reminded me how much "Great scenery" potential this story has, in my mind, I see a room full of candles, with only small unintended rays of light coming through the cracks of the wooden windows, the walls are painted with a very light tone of crimson, room has a strong smell of incense and the seer herself exaggerated on her perfume, her teeth are yellow and mishaped, but her nails are neatly painted. But I'm sure that your imagination is way better than mine, at least give some hints! Also, why that part is in English? Apart from that, once again you do a great job at creating suspense through dialogue, that must be you speciality. Also, very nice reminding the reading that NovaMaat is a world within a world, through constant references to the outside world and how NovaMaat works just as it should, like a computer program, with bugs and administrators, instead of like a mostly real world (that was some of the gripes I had with Matrix).

I suppose the bugs he found weren't the only reason those folks want to cyberassassinate him, I mean, a ban I can understand, but deleting every record of his existance? --Nonimportant 02:29, 11 April 2008 (UTC)