Category talk:Let Us Sleep Now

Very nicely done, if I may say so myself, though I was a bit disappointed with what I thought would be "scientific experiment" becoming "war with complications", that was one of the good war stories. I did have to keep a notebook of characters, but the plot seemed good, for a war story. The war scenes themselves were terribly well-written. There were quite a lot swear words when I'd least expect someone to swear, with even the narrator using them, but I suppose it fits the mood. I wish there was more backstory though, I'd love to know more about these two societies, and perhaps my wish will be granted some day, since this is supposed to be a series. --Nonimportant 14:27, 2 December 2007 (UTC)