Talk:Galactic Empire: A History of Oppression

(I didn't comment before because I hadn't finished reading) When I read the name, I expected Star Wars. Instead, I was presented with the biggest crossover in the history of crossovers. As far as I understand it, this story's universe encompasses all fictional universes as different dimensions. And when Palpatine created the galactic empire, he decided to conquer (and oppress) everybody. The premise is certainly original, though I feel that maybe it necessarily leads to a disjointed narrative, given the immense number of influences and characters to deal with.

As I said before, I generally prefer the traditional prose, rather than bullet-points, but maybe in this one it's justified. The little episodes of "imperial oppression" have little relation to each other, acting a small episodes or anecdotes, rather than a coherent story. Still, the great variety of snippets ensure that there's everything for everyone to enjoy, be it jabs at Power Rangers or shocking (but unsurprising) displays of callousness by Tarkin.

The writing is good, like your other pieces. Succinct but descriptive, and action-heavy. And there's very little spelling mistakes in this one. And as for the "oppression", it's good to see that every single act by the Empire is justified, rather than pointless villainy, even if this justification is only to rid the world of what the Emperor considers crappy TV shows. Anyways, it was entertaining, looking forward for more from you, though maybe you'd want to experiment with something more intimate, small-scale?

P.S.: What did you mean by "Reasons it could be replaced"--Nonimportant 01:31, August 24, 2010 (UTC)