User:Hearts Edge

Formerly known as Pyrosprite, I am renewbed to Novelas. The onlyreason why I'm making this is to get reviews of my works in progress. I'm tweaking what I have of "Heart's Edge" thusfar, to make it more coherent and easy to read. I want the characters to stay in character and for the most part that is going splendidly. The one person I've yet to figure out is Erika. No matter, she will come in time.