Talk:Saphrona's Jewel/3

Like the other chapters, this one started out well, and was at least consistent the whole way through. Why did Jet Jatar greet Qura warmly though, when he's so cruel to his son. She's essentially a stranger to him, forced into his family, and Jet comes off as a volatile kind of guy to me. And what's this, do I see the influence of Chinese culture? Golden bracelets with dragons, saffron silk dresses? Very nice. I'll give a rating once the chapter is done. 21:06, 19 April 2008 (UTC)