User talk:SoapOperaLover

--David - talk 20:01, 10 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi, I see you are creating fiction both for English and Spanish; interesting. I noticed your use of brackets to show the parts of the script that are descriptions. But maybe it is not needed or could be replaced with italics using italics like this. I corrected the Spanish in your stories so they are grammatically correct now. I corrected: gender, accents, spelling and pasive voice: in Spanish the passive voice is not heavy used as in English, we use transitive verbs, like this:


 * "It is used", translated by se usa (and seldom es usado).
 * "It is said", translated by se dice (and never, es dicho).

--David - talk 01:14, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

I would like to collaborate in your stories if you agree and when there is more content. --David - talk 21:08, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

I think I will wait for you to put more content. You may create a meta too (that is, discussion for the authors to create the story). I will collaborate with My_Beloved_Girlfriend, I will think my ideas and next week we will talk about it and write. --David - talk 20:16, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

"You Really Understand Me?" How do I? Do you mean, your Spanish stories? Well, I am a native Spanish speaker. --David - talk 16:58, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

No clue, sorry. I think I only watched soap operas when I was a kid (I watched them in grandma's company). I will collaborate with you for me to learn to write a script, and for fun. But I know nothing about soap operas. --David - talk 21:19, 19 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Well, I found this in the net: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1245565/soundtrack. --David - talk 21:25, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Starting
OK. First of all, we need a meta (a place to discuss the story). I would suggest the creation of My Beloved Girlfriend/Meta for you to tell me where the story is headed. Besides, we can discuss it in real time at irc://irc.freenode.net/wikia-fiction. You can connect from http://irc.wikia.com, http://java.freenode.net (choosing #wikia-fiction as the channel), or you can use any IRC client like chatzilla (for firefox), mIRC32, etc. --David - talk 15:02, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for your invitation. My interests are fairly narrow and mostly focused on science fiction. I agree with David's suggestion above that it is a good idea to make a "meta" page to facilitate collaboration...providing just a short description of what the story is about is a good start. --JWSchmidt 23:26, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

I have been a little busy with stuff. I can only say right now that I would like to add "organize crime" to it. I mean, Trent and Dwight aren't just criminals; they might be part of a crime organization. I am writing a novel with such topics so I could put some related ideas. So, the murder would be part of a vendetta. --David - talk 21:39, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

I read all the story now. I think I can expand some scenes, like the first, the killing one, but...

>[A man named George Black and his wife Edwina Black are making love outside their home on 9090 South Blaxley Drive in Sea City, Florida until two masked men broke into the Black house and starts to take Edwina hostage.

Are they outside? so they like to be watched, some kind of exhibitionism? Or maybe just the courtyard. You say they broke "into" the house, so how is that scene? They are making love outside but they broke inside... well, I guess the murderers take the hostage and shoot her while she is naked. I need to know that, to know how to write that scene. For now, I can only expand existing scenes until I understand the whole thing. --David - talk 22:43, 26 February 2009 (UTC) --David - talk 22:36, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

I would suggest using less hyperlinks for names or places. Maybe only first time and only when the article is already written. --David - talk 17:02, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Hey
Hey Ericthebrainiac, this is God'sGirl94. I was wondering if you know any Italian. I only know a couple of words, but will be learning it next year in school.--God&#39;sGirl94 20:31, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

That's okay. I took Spanish a couple years when I was ten or so, but I don't remember much.--God&#39;sGirl94 20:42, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

I want to know why they take Edwina hostage if they already know they will kill her. Or, is the murder an accident? --David - talk 20:58, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

>A man named George Black and his wife Edwina Black are making love outside their home on 9090 South Blaxley Drive in Sea City, Florida until two masked men broke into the Black house and starts to take Edwina hostage. The masked men, named Trent Bundelby and Dwight Summerfield, shoot Edwina as she pleads them not to.

Yes. But there are two types of crimes, taking hostages (kidnapping) and murder. I guess some of the pair want to take her hostage to do her or something. I mean, they have a clear mission so they must already know, in advance, what they will do. Take hostages or kill. Not both. Taking hostages is done in a terrorist situation, to exchange them for goods or money, I guess. --David - talk 21:25, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Yes, it's fine, that's the wonders of creating fiction in collaboration. So, they both go to kill Edwina because they are terrorists and she is an agent. I am ready now to write the murder. About the "Rated R", is it good with you? I had never written sex scenes before... --David - talk 00:03, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

About sound tracks for the soap operas... I think I don't know. I only like classical music/operas so it's the only thing I can recommend. --David - talk 00:25, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

My Beloved Girlfriend
It's interesting. Did he add that whole first chapter?--God&#39;sGirl94 13:51, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Howdy
Howdy, "My names Woody, Howdy Howdy Howdy!!" I mimicked Toy Story there. Whatcha doin?--God&#39;sGirl94 15:30, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

I am writing stories and just about to leave to go to a YAR service project. I won't be back until 2pm.--God&#39;sGirl94 15:42, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Yes. Why? --David - talk 21:22, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

OK. Then feel free to tell me when you want a pause. --David - talk 21:36, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

I blocked myself for a year because there was not "forever" as an option. --David 23:54, 3 March 2009 (UTC)

Where's David??
where is User:Davichito? DO you have any idea where he is at?--God&#39;sGirl94 14:48, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Please keep away from David. You've done enough harm. Are you trolling on purpose? Proxima Centauri 14:55, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

your desires
I would like for all of you users to do My Beloved Girlfriend and Mi Amor Es Para Siempre the way that I would like for them to be done <-- Is there a page where you have described your approach? I think it is useful to make pages such as My Beloved Girlfriend/meta that can help authors know how to collaborate on stories. (an example) --JWSchmidt 04:59, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

"waiting on my collaboration" <-- I do not think I would be of much use to your projects. I'm almost entirely stuck in the mode of writing science fiction. --JWSchmidt 17:17, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Collaboration
Thank you for the offer, but I'm afraid that I'll have to decline. I have so much to do every day and night that I am only on for a few minutes at a time. Thank you again for the offer and good luck to you with your works.--God&#39;sGirl94 19:38, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Check the story again, the part about the Valeriani. I think I got Regina wrong since I put her as 16 and you said she was in sophomore, whatever that is. Also, I said she was teaching herself Italian and now I think she is studying that in the sophomore (if that's college or whatever). Tell me your comments about Valeriani section. --Acey &bull; gossip. 16:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

He might be on disguise. By the way, David's account is dead. --Acey &bull; gossip. 16:44, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

As I said, he is in disguise. David is me. I lost the pass to Davichito account and now I am using this one. Well, the "proof" is that my changes to My Beloved Girlfriend have the same style as David's and I am writing The search for Kalid. --Acey &bull; gossip. 16:09, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Who I Want to Collaborate With on My Beloved Girlfriend
So, Ericthebrainiac, who do you want to collaborate with? &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 15:36, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

Talking to yourself in a talk page? I wonder if you do it by phone or webcam too... --Davinci - conversar 17:47, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

I guess I will resume collaboration for you not to go nuts on this page. --Acey &bull; gossip. 00:40, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

See, you made many requests and people will join when they want to. Proxima Centauri added certain parts before you told her to do so. People will join or write just when they see a request or they feel like it. I was busy in other wikis, not here. It's weeks since I don't write anything in here. The reason I did not add more content to your story is I was suffering a writer's block. Now I will try to add things, in the "subplots", specially Regina character, which I like. --Acey &bull; gossip. 00:52, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

I will take a look and see if I can add anything interesting. MaximusfuqwitII

Hi. What are you up to?--God&#39;sGirl94 19:43, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Do you want this written like a script or a story?MaximusfuqwitII 13:46, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Are you going to redo the rest in script form? User:MaximusfuqwitII 20:07, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean with the rest? All the story as it is or up to certain point? --Acey &bull; gossip. 23:56, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

My dialogues suck, I guess. But I will try. I am better at describing thoughts. --Acey &bull; gossip. 00:33, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

So after all the hard work is done, your going to take over? How noble of you. MaximusfuqwitII 02:15, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

It's what I always thought. He wants US to write HIS story. It's funny but fun. --Acey &bull; gossip. 17:13, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

That is not collaboration.MaximusfuqwitII 18:35, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Well, I am not sure what it is. I think it is a good team since I am always short on ideas. I am better at writing other people ideas and developing them than creating them myself. So, be it collaboration or not, I like it and I like his story. --Acey &bull; gossip. 18:37, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Your story is so good that I liked it, in spite of the fact I don't like soap operas or watch them. I like the main plot, the idea is some kind of thriller and I enjoy the way you created many subplots with many characters. Your story can be more like a "universe" and I like that idea. So, I have tried to add content to characters or scenes I like, like I did to the first 2 scenes or Regina's scene. --Acey &bull; gossip. 21:51, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Stories
When you have the time and wish to do it, please read my stories I will wait for you, The Lord of the Wikis and... The search for Kalid (a big one). I need feedback on them. --Acey &bull; gossip. 00:34, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

I could not find your ideas for storylines for The search for Kalid. I found The Lord of the Wikis' and I will wait for you's. --Acey &bull; gossip. 15:42, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

wiki stew
At Wiki fiction stew/My Beloved Girlfriend characters, could you provide a short description of one character as requested at Wiki fiction stew/meta? I do not think there will be any problem using characters from My Beloved Girlfriend in the "wiki stew" project, but in order to get started we need to focus on just a limited number of specific characters each of which has a good description. --JWSchmidt 15:38, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * If you intend Eric Drimmerman to be a character in Wiki fiction stew, you have to write a description of the character at Eric Drimmerman. I'm not sure what this means. Your first priority should be providing a description for the one character you list at Participants. --JWSchmidt 21:03, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

How is My Beloved Girlfriend coming along??-- God’sGirl94 Sign my guestbook 18:06, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

sorry about your "bozo password problem"...But hey!!! talking is great!!!--my talk page if I can help with anything! -- God&#39;sGirl94 (Talk) 16:49, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

My Beloved Girlfriend
I will help as much as I can. give me a task and I will try to fix it to the best of my ability!--my talk page if I can help with anything! -- God&#39;sGirl94 (Talk) 16:52, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

I'll work on that,--God&#39;sGirl94 (Talk) 17:07, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Did you see my user page?--God&#39;sGirl94 (Talk) 17:08, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

that's good!!!...well, not the computer malfunction, but everything else!--God&#39;sGirl94 (Talk) 20:37, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

It's coming. I added a few lines. I have to think a little more on what to put next.--God&#39;sGirl94 (Talk) 16:56, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * She is nice. Why do you ask, and how do you know her name?--Seinfeldfan 24  "That is one magic lougie!" -Jerry Seinfeld 19:46, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
 * She is nice to everyone she meets. So, do you know my name then?--Seinfeldfan 24  "That is one magic lougie!" -Jerry Seinfeld 02:31, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

For Those Who Wish To Work on My Beloved Girlfriend
For those who wish to work on My Beloved Girlfriend, please sign here. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 23:33, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

User:God'sGirl94 Will Help You
God'sGirl94 will help you shortly. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 14:21, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

And why in the hell are you bugging people about My Beloved Girlfriend for? &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 14:21, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Creating New Pages
How do you create new pages for My Beloved Girlfriend, Ericthebrainiac? &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 16:00, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Go into My Beloved Girlfriend, select the article you want to create and create it to your heart's content. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 15:22, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Where is Everybody??!!
Where in blazes is everybody??!! &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 21:48, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
 * of course. Use my user name. I don't want anyone knowing any personal info about me, but how do you know God'sGirl94's real name?--Soupnazifan 24  "You're through Soup Nazi. Pack it up. No more soup for you! NEXT!" -Elaine to Soup Nazi 23:09, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
 * No, that's fine. I was just curious. Why did you leave your signature three times? At the end of every sentance? All you have to do is leave it after the whole message. You also don't have to keep pressing leave message. Just edit the section. You know that right?--Soupnazifan 24  "You're through Soup Nazi. Pack it up. No more soup for you! NEXT!" -Elaine to Soup Nazi 23:19, 30 April 2009 (UTC)