Talk:The Butterfly Ethic

Very very very very interesting! I think I'm in love with your writing style. And you did really good, starting with a bang, grabbing the reader's attention by the balls, and only then moving on to the slow parts. The long periods of time focused on the thoughts of the main character greatly aid defining his personality. A bit lacking in physical description, but superb psychological description. Still, wish there was more meat to the story, will you be continuing it?

P.S.: "What an idiot, I thought. During the fourth and fifth century, Rome was attacked by the Vandals, Franks, Gaul, Angles, and the Huns. Everyone Knows That!". I know it has nothing to do with the text, but the Gauls were pretty much submitted to Rome after Caesar's conquests, in the first century BC. --Nonimportant 18:31, June 15, 2010 (UTC)