User talk:Yunzhong Hou/test poll

The problem with polls is that they can never hope to cover all the possibilities. And if I found the work has too much verbose, most of it concentrated in the characterization, which could be less, and would read better if it was less written in a less contrived way, maybe using dialogues and backstory? Maybe the only problem Ifound is that the character of "Mr. Kleytendon" was contradictory, since he is described as generous, but refuses to give a dollar to a beggar? --Nonimportant 16:39, 19 July 2007 (UTC)