Talk:Chronicles of Kings and Knights/5

I hope people reading this are able to see the small changes in some characters. I did my best to send the message while still being a little subtle, but I think I'm not managing to find a balance. For example, I had Hobenrûd ask about Marin's wound, to show he was worried about her, (While in the beginning, he didn't do much more than make fun of her when she was all covered in mud and possibly scratched) but I'm starting to think most readers won't notice that. And now I couldn't do better than to specifically say "Marin was a little worried about her." to show Marin is starting to care about her companions. What you think? --Nonimportant 02:35, 6 May 2007 (UTC)