Talk:The War

Hmmm...I'm reluctant to say I didn't like it since it should stay,but I find that the men being confident while asking the old man for help seemed to clash.More,you should of lead it to be of the need for women and men to collaborate,instead of bringing in some crazed faction.Also,I think a better name for this would be"A Men and a Women"(replace the as with thes if you don't like the referance)User:Serprex 18:16, 5 June 2007 (UTC)