Talk:The Price of Freedom/1

First draft
Once again, my version of a first draft. This is still a great deal longer than the prologue, obviously, since the only plot-important thing to happen in the prologue was the meeting with Admiral Holman. Here, we jump around between plot-important goings-on, which continues in future chapters. MageKing17 00:11, 29 June 2008 (UTC)