User talk:Davichito

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Do you know what's going on with Deep Vortex? I can only find 265 KB worth of a supposed 1,600 KB story on this site. I think the rest simply got deleted. Abcxyzzzz 23:29, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Wow, whoever said that Deep Vortex is an infringement of copyright is probably an interesting fellow :) It seems the antithesis of a polished work! Oh well, hope you find the link soon. Abcxyzzzz 23:49, 11 October 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm glad to hear that you are back. I want you to check out my latest story and review it when you can, please. -- Pirakafreak24 (that's me!)  ( TALK!!!! ) Life is full of too much homework. 21:53, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

Hah! Well, glad you're back. Or at least an alien impersonating you. Which is even better, really. I'd welcome Yu...er, Abcxyzzzz too, but he didn't say he was back, so I guess I'll wait for confirmation before getting my hopes up. --Nonimportant 22:01, 12 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Well, I'm glad you liked Steve the Fish. Its sorta based on a true story. I have a fish named Steve that I got last night and another fish that is in the story later that I have, and the Human characters are real, even myself, (yes I'm in there, but whom I'm not telling). The only thing was, the fish part is completely fictional up to the part where they're picked up from Wal-Mart, then its Non-Fiction except for the thinking and feelings because, obviously, you can't tell what A fish is feeling unless you get inside their minds. So, Lord of the Wikis. It somehow related to the storyline of Lord of the Rings or not? What is it about? I don't have time to read it right now because I have homemade Pizza in the oven, then My aunt is coming over to have some Pizza, then I have to work on an article for Bioniclepedia, then I'll probobly take a break or something, then I have school tomorrow, so......yeah. Well, we'll see. It could be a long time. -- Pirakafreak24 (that's me!) ( TALK!!!! ) Life is full of too much homework. 01:22, 13 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Ok we all know that you're back so you can take off the "post at your own risk" thing on your talkpage. Also, Might I suggest archiving this talkpage.just copy evrything here and post it here: User:Davichito/TalkArchive1. Then delete everything here so you can have a clean Talkpage. -- Pirakafreak24 (that's me!) ( TALK!!!! ) Life is full of too much homework. 03:39, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

template problem
What is wrong with Template:VirileMail/Cover?

Congrats on making such swift progress with Cellular Civilization! Keep up the good work! :) Abcxyzzzz 23:07, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

The Life of Steve
David, check out The Life of Steve. I've edited it abit more. -- Matorofreak24 (PF24) ( My Talkpage ) I saw High School Musical 3 Senior Year and it ROCKED!!!! 18:06, 25 October 2008 (UTC)

Kalid files
Did this file get brought over to this wiki? --JWSchmidt 05:45, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Monogram Cover
Yes, you read the title right. I've just created a cover for Monogram. Check it out. -- MichaelCrichtonfan24 (PF24) ( Talk ) It is my regret to inform you that Michael Crichton has died of cancer. I am sad. 00:57, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, David, I'm making this book into an actual book, so if you could please delete the email I sent you with the spoiler. I just don't want anyne to get ahold of it. If someone does create a book on it, I'd have to sue them because they're using my copyrighted characters, plot and title. So, please delete the email. -- MichaelCrichtonfan24 (PF24) ( <font color="Blue">Talk ) <font color="Blue">It is my regret to inform you that Michael Crichton has died of cancer. I am sad. 01:00, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks David. -- <font color="Blue">MichaelCrichtonfan24 (PF24) ( <font color="Blue">Talk ) <font color="Blue">It is my regret to inform you that Michael Crichton has died of cancer. I am sad. 02:57, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Response
I left my review on the talkpage. -- <font color="Blue">MichaelCrichtonfan24 (PF24) ( <font color="Blue">Talk ) <font color="Blue">It is my regret to inform you that Michael Crichton has died of cancer. I am sad. 00:54, 13 November 2008 (UTC)

Davichito, do you know who these newest users are? Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 19:51, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the suggestion, Davichito, but unfortunately, no one's going to bother reading it. Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 20:36, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Congratulations!
Dear Davichito,

Congratulations on your promotion to Novelas sysop! I believe we can work together to help better the community and make it truly shine. Critical templates are listed here. If you need any assistance you can always message me.

Cheers, 04:43, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

Hey Davichito, thanks for your review of Human Mind Project! Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 22:36, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Lost in Time
I made a few edits to its section 1. Take a look. Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 05:02, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

Thomas
I made a few changes to this work as well, seeing these two works being listed on the main page's request bulletin. I hope you liked the edits I made. You may want to read more stories to get a better grasp of how people construct sentences. It seems you are not very familiar with English, since the sentences you use are rather short. You may want to string together some sentences with related ideas so as to make the sentences flow. That would make the story a more interesting read. Hope this helps! Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 15:59, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

The search for Kalid
Hey Davichito, I read through chapters 1 and 2. They're pretty good, though with too much background and not much going on. There's a lot of thinking about whether or not the metaphysics is for real, in my opinion, too much. There isn't much action by comparison. I don't know how you managed to get to like chapter 8 when you still don't have anything for chapter 3 - maybe do them in order. Right now the story I'm working on, Harbinger, has the same issue going on: there's a large final chunk (around 1/3 or 1/4 of the entire story) separated from the rest, and now that I need to re-integrate it, I find myself having to rewrite that last part. Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 18:59, 22 November 2008 (UTC)


 * There is the out method of making two distinct parts for the isolated chapters and just letting the reader fill in the blankUser:Serprex 19:50, 22 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the reviews. Well, I managed to get to chapter 8 thanks to JWSchmidt. He resumed the story at chapter 4 (he did not want to write about battles in chapter 2), when I only had written chapter 1. I wrote chapter 1, 2 and parts of 6, the rest are his collaborations: 4, 5, 6, 7. And you are right, we have to merge both parts at chapter 3... And fix first chapter which is mostly conversations. I will start reading Harbinger, by the way. --David 20:35, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

Hey Davichito, I would like for you to read my novel, Harbinger (which doesn't require much knowledge about Starcraft). Even if only a few chapters. Please give me some feedback, and rate the work, too! Thanks in advance. Abcxyzzzz http://www.wikia.com/skins/common/progress-wheel.gif 20:41, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Chimps and Atlantis
This is probably not closely related to your idea, but I saw part of a TV show about Atlantis that mentioned Edmund Kiss. Apparently he wrote some novels about Atlantis (Spring in Atlantis, The Last Queen of Atlantis, etc) and was familiar with World Ice Theory. These folks were interested in plot devices such as various moons moving into Earth orbit and causing changes in conditions on Earth that selected for or against various types of humans. --JWSchmidt 15:55, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

Fictional Story
David, could you please delete the page Fictional Story? Its my friend's story, and he wants it deleted. Please delete it. Thanks-- <font color="Green">Bioniclepediapodcaster24 ( <font color="Yellow">Talk ) <font color="Purple">I'm rereading New Moon! It rocks! 04:18, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm not sure how the story should be. Please amend it. Proxima Centauri 10:30, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Kalid
Please do the required deletions/page moves to move the contents of Chapter 10 to The search for Kalid/11, 9 to 10, 8 to 9 and 7 to 8. Page sections 4-7 from here can then be cut/pasted into Chapter 7. Thanks. --JWSchmidt 01:22, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

You can delete Image:Hyperdrive animation.gif and Image:SpaceshipAnimated.gif, they have been replaced by Image:Spaceship docking.gif. --JWSchmidt 05:29, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

collaboration
Thank you very much! That picture makes Asimov look like the cat who ate the canary...and I mean that in a nice way (not "smug"). 2008 has been an amazing year ... I never imagined that I would get involved in writing "space opera", and again, I do not mean that in a bad way...I am enjoying the chance to help with "The Search for Kalid"...it is certainly not the kind of thing I would have ever tried to do on my own, but I am learning much. Thanks for inviting me to all the great collaborations of this past year! --JWSchmidt 02:48, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

--Veriteo 16:39, 2 January 2009 (UTC)hey my name is Andrew i would love if you want to collaborate with me on writing cool story's and on the cave yes it has some connection with the anunnaki

[infromation] about the large story you can add what you like just keep the original characters

Seth Gordon Ideas
Hey David can you help me with some ideas on Seth Gordon. --Veriteo 04:27, 5 January 2009

Tyroguun
Hi David! Do you want to read my 2 stories (VX and VX Extended Edition)? If you did, tell me what you liked about VX. I will make VX 2 soon when I am ready. --Tyroguun 16:52, 17 January 2009 (UTC)

lost page
Did a page called So long and thanks for all the Oil get deleted? --JWSchmidt 03:19, 7 January 2009 (UTC)

logo
The shape of the flower is the logo? --JWSchmidt 02:09, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Star Trek: Unity
Do you know what happened to this? --JWSchmidt 04:16, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

Kalid questions
When does Kalid know that Kaleb and Megan survived? --JWSchmidt 22:14, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Can Chapter 10 be moved to right after Chapter 7? --JWSchmidt 04:37, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

I have been wondering if it makes sense to say that the Spaceship Guild is the most important economic force in the galaxy. Maybe we should more fully develop the idea of nanotechnology and have something like the "Nanite Guild" which could be even more wealthy than the Spaceship Guild. It might then be possible to say that the "Nanite Guild" has grown to exercise political control over the galaxy and replace the "Empire" with some political entity that represents the interests of the "Nanite Guild".

Maybe the Haldus Order Temple on Earth is little more than a memorial to all those who died in the antimatter drive explosion over the Sinai Peninsula. I think it would be fun if there was a "show down" on Earth, but then Ketar must go to Haldus in order to try learn the technological secrets of the Order. --JWSchmidt 00:33, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

Under development: --JWSchmidt 18:21, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 1. Ketar and Set meeting.
 * 2. Haldus Order beliefs
 * 3. Think about Empire vs Nanoguild
 * 4. I still need to finish the story of Set on the Moon.
 * 5. I want to develop the idea that there is an agent of the Empire who has been using tools like Bahney to spy on Sybil and Leone.
 * 6. We need to decide on exactly what remains at the location of the Haldus Order Temple on Earth.
 * 7. I've been thinking about how it is possible that Kaleb and Logan survived the attack on Flammis. I think it is worth developing the topic of telepathy and artificial intelligences. I will gently start in on this theme with Portia and Glen, but I think someone like Kaleb should be the expert in robot telepathy.

Collaboration with Me
Yes, User:Davichito, you will collaborate with me because I would love the assistance of you and other writers out there. --Ericthebrainiac 00:59, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

We will start next Monday whenever I get a chance to be on this computer. --Ericthebrainiac 00:59, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

You may start writing biographies about my fictional characters right now but you will have to wait for the collaboration part net week on Monday. Is that all right with you, David?

My Collaboration with You on Monday
You may write about my fictional characters to my liking right now but you will have to wait for my collaboration until Monday. --Ericthebrainiac 20:16, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

Is that all right with you, David? --Ericthebrainiac 20:16, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

You Really Understand Me
You really understand me when others on Wikipedia didn't. Now I understand you when you said that the both of us will be waiting on our collaboration for next Monday. --Ericthebrainiac 16:49, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks a million, David. --Ericthebrainiac 16:49, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

What I Mean By "You Really Understand Me"
What I mean by that is that you understood me by my Spanish stories and that you allowed for us to wait until Monday for our collaboration. --&#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 17:04, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

That's what I mean by "You Really Understand Me". --&#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 17:04, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

I Got You Started for Monday
I got you started for Monday because I wanted you to be prepared for that time. --&#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 16:45, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

The Songs Featured In Cuidado con el angel
What are the songs that are featured in every scene and every episode of Cuidado con el angel? --&#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 20:58, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Hello
Finally, I am here:-)--Juan de Vojníkov 22:35, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Let's Get This Thing Started!
Let's get this thing started! --&#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 14:57, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

I Don't Wish to Use IRC, But...
I don't use IRC, but you would help me write my story on this website.

Ficciones / Fiction
hola davi, te juro q hoy estaba pensando en crear una nueva historia y ponerla en tu "ficciones", si esa wikia esta un poco inactiva pero sigue siendo grande para mi, no la borres o elimines, please. Si finalmente decides trasladar la parte en español para aqui, esta bien, pero avisame antes, y yo mismo trasladare "mis" historias, para q quede claro al resto de los lectores que yo las comence. Mientras tanto voy a comenzar otra historia en tu ficc. gracias por preguntar--Fero 01:46, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
 * ok, yo mismo copiare mis historias de Ficciones a Fiction, un dia de estos. Alli tienes muy buenas Plantillas talves puedas adaptar o copiar alguna aqui. Yo tambien dare unas vueltas por esta Fiction aver q hay. Gracias nos vemos. Revisa "Super" mas tarde--Fero 02:18, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

The central plot to My Beloved Girlfriend
The central plot to My Beloved Girlfriend is that George Black's wife, Edwina was killed by Trent Bundelby and Dwight Summerfield in 2009 because she was a government agent for the fictional Central Intelligence Bureau in the fictional South Florida city of Sea City. In Chapter 2 of the story, Trent and Dwight were arrested for the murder and were asked why they did the murder in the first place when Mauricia had a major mental breakdown as she was being led out of the Sea City Police Department. In Chapter 3, Justina Kingstone found Stephanie Franciscus and Sabrine Masterson next to each other next to a window when she shot Stephanie to death. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 16:01, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

That's what the central plotline is, User:Davichito. &#91;&#91;Erictnebrainiac&#93;&#93; 16:01, 25 February 2009 (UTC)