Talk:The Sorcerers of Infinity/4

FYI: This chapter is a bit confusing. It doesn't explain how Garril and company ended up in a monastery/nunnery and implicitly confuses the church with the monastery. Also, it gives the impression that you don't recognize the difference between a nun and a monk. You also seem to associate being a nun with frolicking and flirting whereas they are supposed to have left behind the secular concept of love altogether. Things seem to move a bit too fast for easy comprehension, and things get a bit jumpy. Wasn't Garril and company going to or already at home? 20:31, 25 December 2007 (UTC)