Category talk:Chronicles of Kings and Knights/1

Okay. Some considerations:
 * This story is incomplete, but the original draft was either one of my first tries at writing anything bigger than a school paper, or my first (Memory fails me), just for the heck of it. I wouldn't even publish it or anything.
 * The main characters were reverse stereotypes of many fantasy writings. An egoistical, uncaring and strong princess and a coward, weak and dishonest hero. Now, in revampment I changed the hero for an normal archetipal hero, only more so. He's arrogant, overly fearless and loves to brag about less than truthful things (Like when he marched for six days straight during the great withdrawal in the third Lukavian war and how he fought an army of tree-men in the desertic continent of Sumdo). But this story is not a parody. I just wanted to break some stereotypes.
 * I made some modifications to the prologue and transformed the four small chapters I had wrote in only two.
 * I don't actually have a plot besides the "Leading guy and leading lady unite to defeat evil wizard" thing. But now I think they should go in some quest for reinforcements.
 * If you edit. The focus of the story should be the characters and character development. The world should be described to give atmosphere, though.

The world
The world where this story takes place is very low fantasy. Besides magic and strange creatures like dragons and miers, it's just like alternative reality. But i believe that low fantasy isn't synonym of bad fantasy, as many people here probably heard of one well known low fantasy character. His name is...King Arthur or something :).