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The Shrine
The Shrine is an Earth-like planet in a star system 78 light years from Earth. Nobody lives on the surface of The Shrine: it is treated like a nature preserve. Most people live on space stations that have been constructed using materials obtained from asteroids. The largest space stations are the remnants of mined asteroids. The Prologue introduces the ancient and peaceful culture that protects The Shrine. This peaceful culture is about to come into contact with the Earth Empire which "devours whole planets" like The Shrine. --JWSchmidt 11:16, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Hmm.
I don't know if I really should just discard this work. I feel like it could use work, but it isn't bad just because it wasn't my original idea. Perhaps change the title and keep it as a seperate work. MageKing17 23:35, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Note: "The Shrine" was moved to another page. --JWSchmidt 03:02, 29 June 2008 (UTC)