Talk:The Real Day

Okay, so my friend Lacrymosa edited this so it was all pretty and stuff and categorized it.

Okay everyone! Heres my chapters 1-2 commentary.

Lynne is a girl who loves to look pretty. I am a guy with no fashion sense. I have NO idea what a girl would fashionably wear in the summer. Lacrymosa suggested a few outfits so I chose the hoodie. Then I remembered the stupid thing was written in a SUMMER setting. So I had to like make Harry or someone convince her to change.

Next. Lynne is a greedy suburban girl who gets everything she wants. She likes to bend Harry's words when SHE is telling the story and make him sound dumb and make herself sound awesome and calm and cool. When in reality she is about the biggest spaz in the world.

Next again. Lynne sounds like linen and I only figured two six-year-olds would be immature enough to nickname each other that kind of thing.

Even more next. Lynne is enthralled with some guy at her school. I guess I'll make him a bigger part of the story later but at most he will be a tertiary character.

Onward and upward my friend! Harry likes oranges but Lynne is a tad paranoid. He tried one when she got them and found he had a love for them that burnt hotter than 1,000,000 suns *Plutonically speaking of course :P *. There isn't a whole lot of meaning to that entire scene other than rounding off the chapter.

Chapitre 2 mon ami!

Okay, this is how my story works... Lynne starts off a certain timeline. She does her take on that and then Harry her younger twin does his take on that space of time. Not all of the chapters will be so similar. Since they have different classes at high school many will have nothing to do with each other.

Harry is heavily based on me. He is different in alot of ways though. I don't like putting myself in novellas because it seems...self-serving. Not that I care what other authors do! I like to read books like that but I just don't think I personnaly would want to.

Now for the kicker. Harry is the comedic basis of this book. He was explained in my overly cheezy prologue so I don't have to explain him again do I?

FINALLY! My reflection on how these chapters went. They went well I guess. Please, do comment on my work as writing from the perspective of a girl :P! My prologue needs work and I need some suggestions >.>. Let's see...I'll write asap. But I'm too tired tonite from writing all this and finding out how to use this site. And now, for my suggestions of good reading materials and a preview for my next chapters and maybe even special thanks...thankses...thanks'? THANKS! Special thanks go to: -Lacrymosa for forcing me to do this and for his advice. -Victoria for being supportive of my writing. -That thing for being so easy to do! :P -Finally wiki for having this. Reading Materials I suggest: -For you ladies... Absolute Boyfriend and Eerie Queerie (They are mangas and teens will like them most I think..OH and they ARENT for small kids!) -For you guys...well unless you like strange books and manga like me... FIND IT YOURSELVES! Preview! Harry and Lynne go through a normal day at school. But a normal day for a popular girl with something against brainwaves and her twin brother with forced friends is not so normal. Her class worships her, his class makes him want to...do awful things. Stay tuned for chapters 3&4 Science with Lynne! Gym with Harry! Ciao!