Talk:The Dream Should Be Gone

Review by: Yunzhong Hou (7000+ edits)
1/5. For a short story, this is highly lacking in development, and could use a lot more plot. Of course, it is a very short story, but that doesn't mean that nothing should happen... Note that it is really hard to write a very powerful very short story, but even so, the quality can greatly be improved, such as character relationships. Adding an underlying theme may also help. Otherwise, readers are left with a sense of emptiness. 20:51, 26 March 2007 (UTC)