User talk:SoapOperaLover

--David - talk 20:01, 10 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi, I see you are creating fiction both for English and Spanish; interesting. I noticed your use of brackets to show the parts of the script that are descriptions. But maybe it is not needed or could be replaced with italics using italics like this. I corrected the Spanish in your stories so they are grammatically correct now. I corrected: gender, accents, spelling and pasive voice: in Spanish the passive voice is not heavy used as in English, we use transitive verbs, like this:


 * "It is used", translated by se usa (and seldom es usado).
 * "It is said", translated by se dice (and never, es dicho).

--David - talk 01:14, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

I would like to collaborate in your stories if you agree and when there is more content. --David - talk 21:08, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

I think I will wait for you to put more content. You may create a meta too (that is, discussion for the authors to create the story). I will collaborate with My_Beloved_Girlfriend, I will think my ideas and next week we will talk about it and write. --David - talk 20:16, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

"You Really Understand Me?" How do I? Do you mean, your Spanish stories? Well, I am a native Spanish speaker. --David - talk 16:58, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

No clue, sorry. I think I only watched soap operas when I was a kid (I watched them in grandma's company). I will collaborate with you for me to learn to write a script, and for fun. But I know nothing about soap operas. --David - talk 21:19, 19 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Well, I found this in the net: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1245565/soundtrack. --David - talk 21:25, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Starting
OK. First of all, we need a meta (a place to discuss the story). I would suggest the creation of My Beloved Girlfriend/Meta for you to tell me where the story is headed. Besides, we can discuss it in real time at irc://irc.freenode.net/wikia-fiction. You can connect from http://irc.wikia.com, http://java.freenode.net (choosing #wikia-fiction as the channel), or you can use any IRC client like chatzilla (for firefox), mIRC32, etc. --David - talk 15:02, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for your invitation. My interests are fairly narrow and mostly focused on science fiction. I agree with David's suggestion above that it is a good idea to make a "meta" page to facilitate collaboration...providing just a short description of what the story is about is a good start. --JWSchmidt 23:26, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

I have been a little busy with stuff. I can only say right now that I would like to add "organize crime" to it. I mean, Trent and Dwight aren't just criminals; they might be part of a crime organization. I am writing a novel with such topics so I could put some related ideas. So, the murder would be part of a vendetta. --David - talk 21:39, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

I read all the story now. I think I can expand some scenes, like the first, the killing one, but...

>[A man named George Black and his wife Edwina Black are making love outside their home on 9090 South Blaxley Drive in Sea City, Florida until two masked men broke into the Black house and starts to take Edwina hostage.

Are they outside? so they like to be watched, some kind of exhibitionism? Or maybe just the courtyard. You say they broke "into" the house, so how is that scene? They are making love outside but they broke inside... well, I guess the murderers take the hostage and shoot her while she is naked. I need to know that, to know how to write that scene. For now, I can only expand existing scenes until I understand the whole thing. --David - talk 22:43, 26 February 2009 (UTC) --David - talk 22:36, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

I would suggest using less hyperlinks for names or places. Maybe only first time and only when the article is already written. --David - talk 17:02, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Hey
Hey Ericthebrainiac, this is God'sGirl94. I was wondering if you know any Italian. I only know a couple of words, but will be learning it next year in school.--God&#39;sGirl94 20:31, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

That's okay. I took Spanish a couple years when I was ten or so, but I don't remember much.--God&#39;sGirl94 20:42, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

I want to know why they take Edwina hostage if they already know they will kill her. Or, is the murder an accident? --David - talk 20:58, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

>A man named George Black and his wife Edwina Black are making love outside their home on 9090 South Blaxley Drive in Sea City, Florida until two masked men broke into the Black house and starts to take Edwina hostage. The masked men, named Trent Bundelby and Dwight Summerfield, shoot Edwina as she pleads them not to.

Yes. But there are two types of crimes, taking hostages (kidnapping) and murder. I guess some of the pair want to take her hostage to do her or something. I mean, they have a clear mission so they must already know, in advance, what they will do. Take hostages or kill. Not both. Taking hostages is done in a terrorist situation, to exchange them for goods or money, I guess. --David - talk 21:25, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Yes, it's fine, that's the wonders of creating fiction in collaboration. So, they both go to kill Edwina because they are terrorists and she is an agent. I am ready now to write the murder. About the "Rated R", is it good with you? I had never written sex scenes before... --David - talk 00:03, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

About sound tracks for the soap operas... I think I don't know. I only like classical music/operas so it's the only thing I can recommend. --David - talk 00:25, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

My Beloved Girlfriend
It's interesting. Did he add that whole first chapter?--God&#39;sGirl94 13:51, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Howdy
Howdy, "My names Woody, Howdy Howdy Howdy!!" I mimicked Toy Story there. Whatcha doin?--God&#39;sGirl94 15:30, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

I am writing stories and just about to leave to go to a YAR service project. I won't be back until 2pm.--God&#39;sGirl94 15:42, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Yes. Why? --David - talk 21:22, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

OK. Then feel free to tell me when you want a pause. --David - talk 21:36, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

I blocked myself for a year because there was not "forever" as an option. --David 23:54, 3 March 2009 (UTC)

Where's David??
where is User:Davichito? DO you have any idea where he is at?--God&#39;sGirl94 14:48, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Please keep away from David. You've done enough harm. Are you trolling on purpose? Proxima Centauri 14:55, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

your desires
I would like for all of you users to do My Beloved Girlfriend and Mi Amor Es Para Siempre the way that I would like for them to be done <-- Is there a page where you have described your approach? I think it is useful to make pages such as My Beloved Girlfriend/meta that can help authors know how to collaborate on stories. (an example) --JWSchmidt 04:59, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Collaboration
Thank you for the offer, but I'm afraid that I'll have to decline. I have so much to do every day and night that I am only on for a few minutes at a time. Thank you again for the offer and good luck to you with your works.--God&#39;sGirl94 19:38, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Check the story again, the part about the Valeriani. I think I got Regina wrong since I put her as 16 and you said she was in sophomore, whatever that is. Also, I said she was teaching herself Italian and now I think she is studying that in the sophomore (if that's college or whatever). Tell me your comments about Valeriani section. --Acey &bull; gossip. 16:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)